Sep's Realm (continued)

Hey, sorry I haven't posted for a week or so. I was about to post a few days ago but we had some story complications. Apparently, in our rough draft, we forgot to mention Mrs.Gringe's "ever so important!" part in the story. I didn't even know Mrs.Gringe could read! Anyway, we argued over the significance of her part, and she won. Can you ever win against her? Besides, If I ever went back there without giving her any credit, she might make me eat her stew. And who wants that?! So, here is the "revised" edition of Sep's Realm.

Rupert reached the girl on the sand. He picked her up and listened for a heartbeat. He breathed out a sigh of relief and brought the unconscious girl on board the vessel. The people in the boat stared at her in shock, and no one dared go near her. Except the little boy, he reached out to touch her, but his mother pulled him back. Rupert maneuvered the boat along, stopping at the North Gate Gatehouse. He yelled up for his father. Mr.Gringe rushed to his son, knocking over a pile of sticks Mrs.Gringe was stacking for firewood. "Watch where you're going!" she growled as she picked up the wood. Mr.Gringe paid her no mind as he took the girl from his sons hands. (See, that's what she was freaking out over! In the first edition, we left out those two sentences. Oh no, tragic. Whatever will we do? =P) Mr.Gringe raced down to the Infirmary, getting numerous bewildered stares from the passersby. One of these people was Jenna. She watched after Mr.Gringe as he rushes down the street. She followed him, staying far enough behind that no one would notice. When Mr.Gringe reached the Infirmary, Rose looked up from her medical book and her eyes widened as she saw him holding a young woman. He quickly told her everything Rupert had said. She nodded and led him to the main part of the Infirmary. He laid the girl on one of the empty beds, then was shooed off by Rose, who insisted she must verify the condition of the patient. Jenna listened from behind the door. She back up just as Mr.Gringe came out. She hid behind a potted flower bush in the corner and watched as he walked out the door. Jenna got up and followed him out. Seeing that there was no longer a point in following him, she turned to find Sep.
When she reached the top of the spiral staircase she knocked on the door. Marcia opened the door.
"Jenna! What are you doing here?" she asked, a bit flustered by Jenna's sudden apperence.
"I wish to speak to Septimus." Jenna said in her princess voice. Knowing that she had to oblidge, she allowed Jenna into her apartment. "Sep!" Jenna called. He appeared a few feet away. Literally.
"I'm busy Jenna."he said. She stared at him.
"Sep, what are you doing?" Septimus held up a bit of paper.
"I'm working on a new UnSeen. I've almost got it. Unfortunately, I worded it wrong apparently. It failed when you called be." He began fiddling with the Charm.
"Sep, there's no time for that!" She grabbed his hand and began leading him down the stairs.
"Where are you taking him?" Marcia demanded.
"The Infirmary", Jenna responded,"You won't believe what I saw today." As she led him to the Infirmary she filled him in on Mr.Gringe and the new patient. At the door to the Infirmary, he stopped.
"Wait, why would I possibly be intrigued by this?" he asked. Jenna thought for a bit.
"Well, I don't know. She seemed important, somehow. I... I can't explain it. I could just tell." Septimus looked skeptical. He threw his hands up in surrender.
"Fine, if your convinced, I suppose I must see it too." Jenna opened the door. Sarah Heap came up beside them.
"Oh, excuse me." she said absentmindedly. She rushed inside and over to the girl on the bed. Septimus and Jenna wandered over to her. Sep looked at the girl, a puzzled look on his face.
"See?", Jenna whispered, "I told you there was something interesting about her." Sep nodded in agreement. The girl stirred. Sarah turned and whispered something to Rose. Suddenly, the girl sat up. Sarah rushed to her side and supported her.
"Easy, don't hurt youreslf." Sarah cooed. The girl groaned and her eyes fluttered open. She looked up at Sarah.
"Where-where am I?" Rose stepped into the girl's view.
"The Infirmary, miss." Rose said. Sarah looked at the girl.
"What's your name, sweetie?" Sarah asked quietly.
"Um, uh-,"the girl thought for a moment," Lenora Rainsong." She looked around, her gaze rested for a moment on Septimus, then turned back to Sarah. "Leo, for short."

 When Sarah asked me for my name, I had no idea what I would say, I mean, first time as a Realm Traveler! I had just done what I thought I could never do! Could you remember your own name in that kind of situation? It was pretty intense! However, that was only the beginning of my first adventure! Until next time, dream on!
                 -Agent TrailBlaiser